During an ad performance review on 2025-09-30, four new Bluepoint landing pages (PMAX, Cashless ATM, Reverse ATM, Traditional ATM) were reviewed and found to have several conversion-limiting UX issues. The campaigns were generating strong click volume and healthy CTRs, but conversion tracking was broken and the landing pages themselves were not optimized to close leads. This article captures the specific recommendations made and the rationale behind them.
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Replace generic button labels with action-oriented, outcome-specific language. Examples discussed:
| Current | Recommended Alternatives |
|---|---|
| Learn More | Let's Talk / Get a Proposal / Go Cashless |
| Send Message | Schedule a Call / Get Your Free Consultation |
The CTA should reflect what the user is actually getting — e.g., on the Reverse ATM page, something like "Get a Free Reverse ATM Consultation" is more compelling than "Learn More."
Above or below the form, add a brief statement explaining what happens next. Examples:
- "Fill out the form and a specialist will call you within 24 hours."
- "Submit your info and we'll schedule a time to talk."
An even stronger option: embed a scheduling link (e.g., Calendly) directly adjacent to the form so users can self-book immediately.
Each landing page should have CTAs that match the product context:
- Cashless ATM page: "Go Cashless Today" / "Get a Cashless ATM Quote"
- Reverse ATM page: "Get a Free Reverse ATM Consultation"
- Traditional ATM page: "Get ATM Pricing" / "Talk to an ATM Specialist"
| Owner | Task | Priority |
|---|---|---|
| Ben San Fratello | Implement sticky header with persistent CTA + phone number | High |
| Ben San Fratello | Replace "Learn More" / "Send Message" CTAs with stronger alternatives | High |
| Ben San Fratello | Add post-submission explanation copy above/near each form | High |
| Ben San Fratello | Consider adding scheduling link adjacent to form | Medium |
| Melissa Cusumano | Consolidate to single tracked phone number per page; remove footer extras | High |
| Melissa Cusumano | Update landing page URLs in ad campaigns once pages are finalized | High |
| Team | Investigate CallRail setup for Bluepoint phone tracking | Medium |
"I don't love learn more on a landing page because you're sort of taking somebody who clicked on an ad, which means there's some intent there... you want to use a more compelling CTA like 'let's talk' or 'get a proposal' or 'get an offer' or 'let's meet' — something that's a little more down the funnel."
— Mark Hope, 2025-09-30 Ad Review Call"At the top of every form, the $64 question when you're filling out a form is: what's going to happen when I click submit? Are they going to start to spam me? Are they going to give me something to download? What's going to happen?"
— Mark Hope, 2025-09-30 Ad Review Call
The underlying principle: paid ad visitors have already expressed intent. The landing page's job is to remove friction and answer the question "what do I get if I take this action?" Weak CTAs and ambiguous form copy create unnecessary drop-off at the final conversion step.